Final Draft: Vivid Style

 This is my final draft of the magazine that I created. After receiving feedback from my peers I've decided to make drastic changes compared to my rough draft of this magazine. I've altered the masthead of the magazine, the sub headings, the font and the font colors etc. I've done so in a way that I incorporated my peers feedback and their dislikes and combined them into my own unique creations. 

















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